Writing the Pain

Writing takes away the pain,
And puts them into words,
However, it only helps for a moment,
Therefore, I will write and write again,
Thousands of papers hold my thoughts,
Yet this is only the beginning,
Nearly close to the end,
For pain will come again.





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unearthlyhaphazard said...
Jul. 16, 2009 at 5:41 pm
Totally right! I love how you make the poem a cycle sort of thing. Like, it starts with pain, and it also ends with pain. It's intense and emotional, and it's good that way.
 
trangh_64 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 1:27 am
Thank you! That was the purpose. I love making my poems into something more than just words that reflect how I feel at the moment. I try to create an image with the words too :)
 
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