Too Young To Love

June 16, 2009
By SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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Too young to love,
Too early for it to last long,
Too reckless to take it seriously.

Too afraid of getting hurt,
Too obedient to your parents,
Too proud to face rejection.

Too ignorant to care,
Too confident to try,
Too forgetful to keep promises.

Too practical to see worth,
Too independent to need others,
Too arrogant to find a lover.


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on Jun. 30 2010 at 5:48 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

Very well written :) , keep it up . You have a God given talent

on Dec. 11 2009 at 8:59 pm
Love_Baby SILVER, Wyoming, Michigan
5 articles 4 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What doesn't kill you makes you stronger."
"True love waits."
"If it made you smile never regret it."
"Not everyone's a supermodel."

Love it!! I love the style, what it's saying. Absolutley love it.

on Dec. 11 2009 at 7:11 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

So true and vry well written:)

U have quite the talent;)

on Sep. 30 2009 at 5:48 pm
Writerzhand GOLD, Ball Ground, Georgia
16 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
I wanna carry a piece of who I was before so when I hit the wall, I REALLY hit the wall.

This is great, gotta be one of my faves. You really hit the nail on the head, cuz I think the same exact way. Love how you put it, its awesome!

KLD1992 GOLD said...
on Sep. 14 2009 at 8:43 pm
KLD1992 GOLD, Bradford, Massachusetts
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I LOVE it!^^Amazing!

on Sep. 14 2009 at 8:27 am
MiuBlaze BRONZE, Upper Darby, Pennsylvania
3 articles 1 photo 7 comments
I like it! It's like you're listing all the reasons not to have a relationship or something. Also, I like how you start every line with "Too". Keep on writing!

on Sep. 4 2009 at 4:27 pm
FashionGuru DIAMOND, Manhattan, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't do fashion, I am fashion." -Coco Chanel

Thanks for commenting on my poem, Let me smile. I really understand and feel what you are saying in this poem, I'm not sure if what I said before conveyed that enough. Great job!!!

on Aug. 15 2009 at 2:17 am
carolinesell PLATINUM, Cedar Falls, Iowa
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you use a lot of powerful words.

i like it!!!

:)

vocabulary is a powerful weapon!

Saysh PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 30 2009 at 10:15 pm
Saysh PLATINUM, Brentwood, California
31 articles 1 photo 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia." ~E.L. Doctorow

Oh God! I can totally relate to the second stanza! I LOVE it! Amazing!

on Jul. 26 2009 at 7:46 pm
one_of_a_kind_girl GOLD, N/A, California
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i can totally relate!

on Jul. 20 2009 at 8:22 pm
project827 GOLD, Portage, Michigan
13 articles 1 photo 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Real Revolution Starts At Learning, If You're Not Angry, Then You Are Not Paying Attention" - Tim McIlrath

is this describing you or someone else? cause i really dont know. cool poem though, i like the rhythm. two thumbs up.

cree8ive GOLD said...
on Jul. 15 2009 at 7:49 pm
cree8ive GOLD, Billings, Montana
16 articles 1 photo 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure." Mariane Williamson

thanks for the comment on my poem :) always appreciated. i really enjoyed this. i think it captures something everybody feels.

Lonleydandy said...
on Jul. 15 2009 at 7:38 pm
Wow that was REALLY good!!!!!! I liked it a lot. It was simple but completely true. ~If you wouldn't mind checking out some of my work as well, they have a [what i think] somewhat similar inspiration as this one~ overall it was really great!!!

on Jul. 7 2009 at 6:18 pm
FashionGuru DIAMOND, Manhattan, New York
55 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I don't do fashion, I am fashion." -Coco Chanel

Your work is amazing. I fell in love with this poem, and I know exactly what you mean by it.

erikaee SILVER said...
on Jun. 30 2009 at 12:27 am
erikaee SILVER, Lake Charles, Louisiana
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pretty :)

on Jun. 29 2009 at 8:56 pm
GreenWriter826 PLATINUM, McAllen, Texas
21 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
''Their fruits like honey to the throat
But poison in the blood'' - Christina Georgina Rossetti "Goblin Market"

wow...i don't know if you remember my poems but thanks for the comments... this one is really good...defiantly the part where you explain why the person can't find love so short is really powerfull...good job ;3

on Jun. 27 2009 at 3:45 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

Lovely. Simply beautiful. I loved this poem! Keep up the good work! ;)


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