Too Young To Love

June 16, 2009
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Too young to love,
Too early for it to last long,
Too reckless to take it seriously.

Too afraid of getting hurt,
Too obedient to your parents,
Too proud to face rejection.

Too ignorant to care,
Too confident to try,
Too forgetful to keep promises.

Too practical to see worth,
Too independent to need others,
Too arrogant to find a lover.

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ShenelleCrystalx3 said...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 5:48 pm
Very well written :) , keep it up . You have a God given talent
bluemagnet22 said...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 7:11 pm
So true and vry well written:)
U have quite the talent;)
Writerzhand said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 5:48 pm
This is great, gotta be one of my faves. You really hit the nail on the head, cuz I think the same exact way. Love how you put it, its awesome!
iluvfruitbasket3 said...
Sept. 14, 2009 at 8:43 pm
I LOVE it!^^Amazing!
MiuBlaze This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 14, 2009 at 8:27 am
I like it! It's like you're listing all the reasons not to have a relationship or something. Also, I like how you start every line with "Too". Keep on writing!
FashionGuru said...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 4:27 pm
Thanks for commenting on my poem, Let me smile. I really understand and feel what you are saying in this poem, I'm not sure if what I said before conveyed that enough. Great job!!!
carolines This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 15, 2009 at 2:17 am
you use a lot of powerful words.
i like it!!!
vocabulary is a powerful weapon!
Saysh said...
Jul. 30, 2009 at 10:15 pm
Oh God! I can totally relate to the second stanza! I LOVE it! Amazing!
one_of_a_kind_girl said...
Jul. 26, 2009 at 7:46 pm
i can totally relate!
project827 said...
Jul. 20, 2009 at 8:22 pm
is this describing you or someone else? cause i really dont know. cool poem though, i like the rhythm. two thumbs up.
cree8ive said...
Jul. 15, 2009 at 7:49 pm
thanks for the comment on my poem :) always appreciated. i really enjoyed this. i think it captures something everybody feels.
Lonleydandy said...
Jul. 15, 2009 at 7:38 pm
Wow that was REALLY good!!!!!! I liked it a lot. It was simple but completely true. ~If you wouldn't mind checking out some of my work as well, they have a [what i think] somewhat similar inspiration as this one~ overall it was really great!!!
FashionGuru said...
Jul. 7, 2009 at 6:18 pm
Your work is amazing. I fell in love with this poem, and I know exactly what you mean by it.
erika E. said...
Jun. 30, 2009 at 12:27 am
pretty :)
BeccaBlue826 said...
Jun. 29, 2009 at 8:56 pm
wow...i don't know if you remember my poems but thanks for the comments... this one is really good...defiantly the part where you explain why the person can't find love so short is really powerfull...good job ;3
sallyloco said...
Jun. 27, 2009 at 3:45 pm
Lovely. Simply beautiful. I loved this poem! Keep up the good work! ;)
Love_Baby replied...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 8:59 pm
Love it!! I love the style, what it's saying. Absolutley love it.
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