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American Dream This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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so this is where all the dreaming takes me
to a cold, empty reality
with sleep still in my eyes
shivering, confused, I must’ve overslept
now it’s time to wake up
one last yawn, then face the lies
I’m barefoot and the streets are rough
paved with broken glass
but that’s okay
’cause the land is flowing
with milk and honey
bread and butter
and justice
if you just keep on going ...



This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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Miara said...
Nov. 9, 2011 at 9:15 am:
This has no feeling, no meaning.  To write, one must be willing to face something that needs to be faced.  This does not.  You have potential, but this doesn't hit a mark.
 
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bpjrobert said...
Sept. 26, 2011 at 9:06 pm:
This is great.
 
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manisha said...
Sept. 26, 2011 at 6:19 am:
you have a certain way of expressing your thoughts. loved the poem!
 
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Gabe-Mage said...
Aug. 13, 2011 at 11:38 pm:
Interesting how the modern "American Dream" is not the same as in the past. Modern Americans don't really believe in progress. 
 
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ishmael_bishop This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 13, 2011 at 10:34 pm:
Wow, after puttting things into perspective, I finally understand "American Dream". Great job!  
 
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TotheSeaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 13, 2011 at 12:12 pm:
At first I wasn't sure what I thought about this poem but when I read the ending, that sealed it for me.  You did a really nice job!
 
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ohheyyyelli said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 7:19 pm:
I love this. Especially the ending. You're really talented!
 
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dancechickThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 3:22 pm:
This is beautiful, you write really well. Can you please comment on some of my work? I'd love to hear what you think. Keep writing!
 
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Arco_Sine said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 2:39 pm:
As a writer you want to have meaning and not just everyday laundry meaning, real meaning. Have a unique reason to write. If you want to say pretty things, that's good for yourself. But the world needs purpose.
 
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Shmelmo said...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 7:30 pm:
This is really good. Awesome job!! Keep it up!
 
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RanaHewezi1998 said...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 5:01 pm:
wow dat is amazing
 
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stormblade85 said...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 4:49 am:
Good job on the poem. It's great, and the imagery is simple, but effective. For that, I give you five stars. :)
 
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ExpRESsY0uRselF said...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 8:00 pm:
WOW...5 stars all the way! :) This poem was amazingggg! I loved it so much! Also, if anyone has time, please check out and comment on my poem, The Girl Inside...THANK YOU SO MUCH! :)
 
Napoleon Gouzeshi replied...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 10:42 am :
Follow your course.let others to say.
 
ExpRESsY0uRse1F replied...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 4:48 pm :

????????

 

 
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bookwormjunkie said...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 5:10 pm:
i liked it, but i really didnt understand it. must've been that im too young to really comprehend it[going to 8th grade]but yea. ITS REALLY GOOD NEVERLESS!!XD
 
purplelessskin replied...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 11:13 pm :
it's about immigrants coming to america in search of the "american dream" of prosperity and justice for all but finding a much harsher reality.
 
bookwormjunkie replied...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 11:21 pm :
OHH
 
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K.M.S.Shear said...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 6:44 am:

i liked it

 

 
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annexgrey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 20, 2011 at 2:37 am:
I love it. 
 
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