the notion MAG

By Claire T., Normal, IL

Hey, I’ve got this notion
that in the end we’ll both be okay
I’ll set this love in motion
Set down your load
Just watch me press play
And it’ll all unfold
Let me hold your trembling heart
Realize that these truths
Are worth more than
Our weight in gold
You said don’t
Just live and settle
’Cause being like them
Leaves nothing to find
And what’s the use in living
Unless we both decide
Not to fall into line





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i love this so much!

on Jun. 30 2011 at 2:16 pm
Shania Mayhan BRONZE, Fromberg, Tennessee
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nice job, i love it!

on Jan. 11 2011 at 8:57 pm
cmiley_freaky SILVER, Mississauga, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Go for it now, the future is promised to no one." - Wayne Dyer.

this is very good, i love the rhyming patterns and the style which makes it a free verse

i remember when i got phrases like "the androids" and "soft pools of black light" into my head and vowed to make poems out of them; the second one came out as RUBBISH, the first was okay

your writing style is quite like mine, i wonder if we all think alike in depressing ways.


on Sep. 17 2010 at 1:58 pm
llamachick PLATINUM, Seneca, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best."
— Marilyn Monroe

this is really really good:))wish i could write with this kind of.....power.

on Mar. 25 2010 at 11:16 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Very nice.

Congrats! on getting this published

I really believe it deserved to be.

Keep writing.

And please check out my work if you can, comment and rate if you wish.

Rating are greatly appreciated.!

~~Shernay B

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on Feb. 9 2010 at 12:54 pm
Thrush BRONZE, Tegaad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Live life to it's fullest extent, it's the only life you've got" "Enjoy yourself, be yourself, love yourself"

This is awesome. I say it completely describes powder puffs. (Don't ask)


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