Frozen

June 14, 2009
By mikeytogo SILVER, Anaheim, California
mikeytogo SILVER, Anaheim, California
7 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Scat man, fat man, black and white and brown man, tell me 'bout the color of your soul."- Scat man.


I am a frozen monument
Of a tattered boy
In a universe that surrounds
Her
Immobilized by her beauty and elegance
Should I tell her my secret?
Should I leave it be?
I am torn between being a friend
Or a lover
I do not want to risk our friendship
So I stay
Frozen


The author's comments:
Sequel to Her

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on Mar. 29 2010 at 9:23 am
mandymac BRONZE, Naples, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Do what you can, with what you have, where you are.

I feel like you could say "I am torn between being a friend or a lover" a different way that flows better, instead of coming out and saying the direct thought.

good work.


on Jun. 23 2009 at 6:20 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
34 articles 0 photos 266 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

I love this one too. And i hope it all works out for you.


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