Frozen

I am a frozen monument
Of a tattered boy
In a universe that surrounds
Her
Immobilized by her beauty and elegance
Should I tell her my secret?
Should I leave it be?
I am torn between being a friend
Or a lover
I do not want to risk our friendship
So I stay
Frozen





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mandymac said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 9:23 am

I feel like you could say "I am torn between being a friend or a lover" a different way that flows better, instead of coming out and saying the direct thought.

good work.

 
xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 23, 2009 at 6:20 pm
I love this one too. And i hope it all works out for you.
 
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