The Great Commercial Deity

June 14, 2009
By Bronwyn Smith BRONZE, Mercer Island, Washington
Bronwyn Smith BRONZE, Mercer Island, Washington
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His unnoticed absence
Has brought looks of shame on me
On street corners and telephone poles
All hail the Great Commercial Deity

His words on bumper stickers
Embroidered with little white lies
And tainted with corrupted opinions
Claiming to see through his eyes

A believe it when I see it world
Yet everyone has doubts about science
Why not, the Lord be tried and sentenced?
And you rightfully his witness

A join now get this free god
Which scams but does not receive
His face a money-making icon
The Great Commercial Deity

The author's comments:
I havn't edited this that much so crtique would be helpful :)

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on Jun. 25 2009 at 7:00 pm
Bronwyn Smith BRONZE, Mercer Island, Washington
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I SPELLED CRITIQUE WRONG.


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