Once upon a time

June 13, 2009
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but im stillhere
still standing here
and i havent moved on
and once upon a time
youd ask me why

and once upon a time
i would have had an answer
but im not really sure
of anything right now

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Shahed said...
May 8, 2010 at 9:30 pm
Why do you make them so short? I like it so much! But its when I started getting into it, it was the end already, try writing longer ones! :) good job!
crazyawesome replied...
May 17, 2010 at 4:47 pm
EVERYONE says that! i guess my poems are a bit short. but sometimes i think if i drag it out, it starts sounding bad, and if i just leave it where it is, it sounds better. but thx 4 ur comments! also MUSLIM MISS USA MAN!!!! haha. ive been happy all dddaaayyy!
Shahed replied...
Jun. 3, 2010 at 9:48 pm
Making them longer will not make them less intresting and I can asure you they wont start sounding bad you're talented and if you go with your ideas little farther (talking about poetry) you'll write such a beauty!
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