Writing a Passionate Poem

June 11, 2009
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A sixteen line poem I must write.
It’s for English class so I won’t fight.

I’m not good at rhyming.
I guess I just have to keep trying.

What should it be on, though?
That, I really don’t know.

Whatever I choose I must have passion,
Could it possibly be the latest fashion?

There’s no way that’s true.
How should I think this through?

Should I take a break?
And grab a piece of cake?

No, if I did I might never come back.
I’d never give this poem another whack.

Wait a minute I’m already done.
Now I’ll go and have some fun.

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iwantcoconow said...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 2:42 pm
My friend you are a poet and just don't know it.
TheRightToDream This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 11:54 am
This made me smile. :D
Zero_K This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 22, 2009 at 6:19 pm
Cute, I love how you wrote poetry while at the same time denying that you could do it. Great job! (Thanks for your comment!)
Joanna said...
Aug. 13, 2009 at 11:21 pm
Like Silver Dawn said, it's very cute. I think you ought to explore poetry some more. I mean, poetry, I think, is just a fancy name for spilling anything out onto a piece of paper. Granted, I have a very liberal sense of what is art and poetry. Anything you write, i'd be happy to read, my friend.
SilverDawn said...
Jul. 5, 2009 at 3:47 am
haha, cute. it's amazing how many people write poems like these and i wonder what teachers think when reading them. you did write a poem though so i'd give you an A for completion but only a C content x). cute tho, cute.
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