Reborn Beauty

June 10, 2009
By LovelyLynn BRONZE, Brea, California
LovelyLynn BRONZE, Brea, California
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everyone is made for another in this world"


What's this I hear?
My thoughts flutter away.
My heart it senses that you're near.
C'mon out and maybe we can play...

And I'm thinking back at all of the things we've done.
Oh my I hope you know,
That you'll always be my Hun.
Just promise me you'll never let go...

When I listen to your voice I have no fears.
You always give me this beautiful breath taking smile.
I love it how you wipe away all of my tears.
And just for you and only you I'd run for miles.

I can't understand why anyone like you would love anyone like me.
Only death will do us apart.
You hold my heart and they key.
I love your warm, warm heart.

And I promise the words I say aren't lies.
Is it just me or is it love?
Just look deep into my eyes.
You're as elegant as a beautiful white dove.

I'm starting to feel this wonderful rush.
I know its hard to say but I can't stop thinking of you.
Why must you continue to have this rosy blush?
I think this is the time to tell you,
I love you...


The author's comments:
This is for a friend, but it could also be for a boyfriend if I had one. I'm not sure, but this might be my best poem. But I dedicate it to my Friend Jess, she's been with me through the hard times and the easy times. And I thank her so much for that.

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on Oct. 16 2009 at 2:58 pm
LovelyLynn BRONZE, Brea, California
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everyone is made for another in this world"

I can only do the rhyming poems, I'm not very good at the others... infact all of my poems rhyme in my poem book. haha(: Thank you for the comment so much >.< I dont' get a lot of veiws or ratings.

TigerLynn GOLD said...
on Oct. 14 2009 at 3:11 pm
TigerLynn GOLD, Maysville, Kentucky
10 articles 0 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"She walks in beauty,
Like the night of cloudless climes and starry skies;
And all that's best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes."
--Byron

RHyming a poem is hard to do i wish i could make my poems rhyme! keep writing

on Jun. 30 2009 at 3:06 am
LovelyLynn BRONZE, Brea, California
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everyone is made for another in this world"

<33 soo excited its on the websitee...




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