The Past, The Present

June 10, 2009
I was trying to die
But I’m still alive now
I watched you instead
The blood flows out of you now
I wish that we could trade places
But it’s too late now
I’m just a coward-
I run away now

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PK4evr This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 16, 2009 at 11:25 pm
Thanks for commenting, this was written from Alex Meyer's point of view. There are plenty of excerpts about him that I've sent to this site if you want to read more about him. Yeah, I believe in God too. :)- Nataile
KristyW said...
Aug. 24, 2009 at 4:27 pm
Hey, I don't know how to message on this... But I do believe in God. Its just I write not always as myself... I'm not sure if that makes sense. But I use other perspectives in my writing. Btw, Your very forward with your writing. I love the new approach.
Estelle_Star said...
Aug. 12, 2009 at 1:15 am
This piece expresses a lot of feelings in a few lines. It shows how someone can really feel, but how other feelings can dominate other ones. It truly is a great piece and you're a talented writer.
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