The Past, The Present

June 10, 2009
By PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
105 articles 5 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make grape juice, then watch everyone wonder how you did it!


I was trying to die
But I’m still alive now
I watched you instead
The blood flows out of you now
I wish that we could trade places
But it’s too late now
I’m just a coward-
I run away now



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PK4evr ELITE said...
on Sep. 16 2009 at 11:25 pm
PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
105 articles 5 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make grape juice, then watch everyone wonder how you did it!

Thanks for commenting, this was written from Alex Meyer's point of view. There are plenty of excerpts about him that I've sent to this site if you want to read more about him. Yeah, I believe in God too. :)- Nataile

KristyW BRONZE said...
on Aug. 24 2009 at 4:27 pm
KristyW BRONZE, Casper, Wyoming
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments
Hey, I don't know how to message on this... But I do believe in God. Its just I write not always as myself... I'm not sure if that makes sense. But I use other perspectives in my writing. Btw, Your very forward with your writing. I love the new approach.

on Aug. 12 2009 at 1:15 am
Estelle_Star SILVER, Union Grove, Wisconsin
7 articles 3 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emtions," James A. Michener.

This piece expresses a lot of feelings in a few lines. It shows how someone can really feel, but how other feelings can dominate other ones. It truly is a great piece and you're a talented writer.


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