Mirror Mirror

June 10, 2009
By SmileyRiley PLATINUM, Tremont, Illinois
SmileyRiley PLATINUM, Tremont, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"You can be a victor without having victims and you can stand tall without standing on someone"


Mirror Mirror on the wall who’s the fairest of them all?
Is it the girl with long legs and a face like a doll?
Or the girl with shiny blonde curls and dimpled cheeks?
Is the fairest the girl who puts people down and shops at expensive boutiques?
What’s wrong with the girls who are smart and have sleek brown locks?
Or the girl that would rather be herself with friends then hang out with the jocks
What about the preps and Goths, what about the loners and the cliques?
Mirror Mirror, were all tired of your antics
Time to own up Mirror… who do you choose?
Well it doesn’t matter, but values and virtues do.



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on Aug. 4 2009 at 9:45 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

way good poem. all of this is 100% true and all of us can picture people just like the ones you explained in the poem. good job :) very well written. check out some of my work :)

on Jul. 1 2009 at 5:20 pm
morgie7<3 PLATINUM, Tremont, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"I've missed more than 9000 shots in my career. I've lost almost 300 games. 26 times, I've been trusted to take the game winning shot and missed. I've failed over and over and over again in my life. And that is why I succeed."
~Michael Jordan

omg! i love it! Keep it up girl!!! :)

amyxu said...
on Jun. 27 2009 at 5:27 pm
Wow, I LOVE this poem. It's so true--all of us can relate to it! Nice job! The only thing that could be improved, in my opinion, are the last two lines. The message in them is good, but the rhymes themselves are a little weaker compared to the other ones throughout the poem. But that's totally your choice. Nice job!




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