All Along

June 9, 2009
By Lifesbutadream BRONZE, Hesperia, California
Lifesbutadream BRONZE, Hesperia, California
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Favorite Quote:
Change is just a new begining


Uncertain of what he thinks
Unsure of everything he says
He seems to be the ink
On my paper these few days

I look forward for my nights
When my candles getting dim
Wishing in the light
That tonight I dream of him

I hope that some day
We will end up together
So every night Ill pray
That if we do we’d be forever

He’d wake up one day
And then he’d surely see
His thoughts will not be Gray
For he will come towards me

He’ll pull me in his arms
For a time that seems so long
He’d Kiss me and he’d say
He really means no harm
and then he’d say the words
I prayed for all night long
After one more kiss
He’d say “I loved you all along”

“you never loose by loving, You only loose by holding back”


The author's comments:
i wrote this poem because, i feel like alot of girls have felt this way some time or another. its not a beautiful feeling. the longing and the fear of not being liked in return. then how once you find out theres absolutly nothing to worry about, its just a big sigh of relief. my inspiration...love.

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on Sep. 3 2009 at 5:23 pm
Isn't that just every girl out there wants when she is crushing on another male?<br />
This is a great insider in a female adolescent's mind. =]

on Jul. 9 2009 at 3:25 am
jaynefferr SILVER, Acworth, Georgia
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that was goregous. Not just a "pretty" poem but wow. im blown away :)

airyn said...
on Jun. 24 2009 at 11:40 pm
I Like Your Style!

stayaycy said...
on Jun. 23 2009 at 10:58 pm
i love this poem soo much i think its one of my favorite. while i was reading it i couldnt help but smile(: Kudos!




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