in lieu of an orchestra screaming melodies of worthless expulsion into our hollow heads This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

the funniest thing -
I can’t remember her voice.
I forgother laugh
they say true friends are never apart
I don’tagree
my heart beats for her
in a rhythmic mode
1 2 -- 1 2--
there’s something missing
it’s the wailof my friend’s sadness
piercing like a needle
beautiful likea raindrop
I feel deaf.
the world could be muted
for all Icare
sound is worthless
when I can’t hear my dear friendsmile

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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Lily">This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 1:45 am
i love this so much!
coly33 said...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 4:45 pm

i dont mind grammer/spelling mistakes soo this was amazing and well written

but i dont get the long title


ArtInBlackandWhite said...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 11:28 am
I. Love. It. Really. Great work.
DearDiaryMyTeenAngstHasABodyCount replied...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 2:40 pm
you have a few places where words got squished  together but all and all a very good write
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