My Humble Surrender

June 9, 2009
By A.N.Whitfield BRONZE, Eastanollee, Georgia
A.N.Whitfield BRONZE, Eastanollee, Georgia
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This awakening of the senses, this voltage of the heart
This fire of the blood, this resonance of romance
Love overwhelming me, this throbbing art
A charming surrender, a flaming trance
Oh, the fire of passion lives in my eyes
And in my soul, I feel peace of night
The ravenous wolf of hate dies
So the loving one's wishes take flight
Though I throb of all my life's exert
I feel your comforting words set forth
And though I cry, I cry nothing of hurt
But of happiness, love of all you're worth
A teardrop of such pleasant substance
Is a jewel of substantial worth
Its your's my love, let romance,
You commended it it's birth,
So in each kiss burns a healingness
Our scars and wounds are nevermore
With eachother, God has both us blessed
Bonded, we make living more
I crumble safely in your arms
And there's no need to stray
I know we'll always be this warm
For I... am here to stay...


Yours truly,
A.N. W.

The author's comments:
I wrote this because of my love for a wonderful girl (A.L.). Shes means the world to me and I love her very much. Everything in this poem is is nothing but true. I hope everyone likes it...

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on Jun. 22 2009 at 5:08 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Awwwww It's very sweet!! I'm sure she would love it if she reads it. I like the rhyme scheme you use in this!

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