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She Felt the Music
June 8, 2009
She saw the lightning
Cutting the sky like a knife
Piercing lonely hearts
She saw the model
Intrigued by her grace and looks
Envy in her eyes
She felt the sorrow
Marooned, without an escape
Trapped, in love and hate
She felt the horror
Paranormal acts
Lights flickering on and off
She heard the wailing
Of all the people who lived
Wading toward her
She heard the music
Melody forming at heart
Dancing with passion
She heard the voices
Screaming with joy and encore
She felt the music
In her feet, she twirled
Taking a bow and curtsy
She felt the music
© Andrea F., Philadelphia, PA
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This article has 11 comments.
calephchad BRONZE said...
on Nov. 23 2009 at 2:25 pm
I love this one. I read it because I'm a music freak. Haha. I just love your use of words. This is such a beautiful Great job.
NascentNovelist GOLD said...
on Aug. 18 2009 at 1:33 am
Oh my. I love this one. I've always wanted to capture the power of music and I feel that you've done very well with that here. Keep up the good work.
alayapoetgirl BRONZE said...
on Jul. 30 2009 at 4:19 am
I like this poem. You used great wording...
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 1 2009 at 5:51 pm
It is really beautiful. I loved it sooo much!
GreenWriter826 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 29 2009 at 8:48 pm
love it! thanks for commenting on my poems too...i never thought it would feel so good for someone to say my poems had deep emotions... but wow...i love this poem...im going to read the rest of them! ;3
amyxu said...
on Jun. 25 2009 at 11:58 pm
This is beautiful!
camille_1441 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 23 2009 at 5:16 pm
Hey I wanted to thank you for all the comments you left on my pieces! I really am so grateful when people here take the time to not only read my work but give feedback on it.
Your poem is really lovely about a girls reflection on the world around her and her mind and body's reaction to it. Keep writing!
Your poem is really lovely about a girls reflection on the world around her and her mind and body's reaction to it. Keep writing!
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