Never Like You

June 8, 2009
By ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac


Like I'm invisible
Not seen by the aspect of one's eyes
Blending in with the stormy skies
Transparent; clearly undefined
Like I'm invisible

Like I'm rebellious
Resisting the urge to be a saint
Authority words begin to faint
Defiance in a world I paint
Like I'm rebellious

Like I'm drolly
Odd in some kind of way
Weird in actions I like to play
Whimsical qualities simply decay
Like I'm drolly

Like I'm liable
Responsible for my commitments
Legally obligated for resentment
Susceptible; poorly presented
Like I'm liable

Like I'm gullible
Like I'm stupid
Like I'm wrong
Or likely to be right

Anyway
I will never be
Like you



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on Feb. 1 2010 at 9:26 pm
literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
23 articles 3 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we're going." Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls
"The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound." Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde

i had to go look up drolly cuz i completely missed that it was an adverb form of droll. i feel stupid. but this was awesome!!! once again, i loved loved loved the rhyme!!

on Jan. 7 2010 at 1:56 pm
despurlock DIAMOND, Morgantown, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The heart has its reasons which reason does not know." -Pascal, Pensees, 1670

I love, love, love how you repeat your first line in the first four stanzas but then you change for the last two stanzas. My fave stanzas are the last two because they are good clenchers! Great work! 5 stars!

tbkeleli said...
on Dec. 23 2009 at 11:55 pm
GREAT POEM. this really deserves to be published. excellent. i love the rhyme scheme.

on Nov. 23 2009 at 2:32 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
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This poem is amazing. I love the style in this one. You're rhym form in this poem is just so unique and I absolutely love it! My favourite stanza is the one that begins with "Like I'm rebellious", and the ending is just incredible. I won't even start to attempt to try to explain how those last two paragraphs made me feel. By the way, thanks for commenting on my poems. This one is a definite 5 out of 5. I love it! Great job.

on Jul. 1 2009 at 5:53 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

It could be a song you just need a chorus. It was beautiful.

on Jul. 1 2009 at 4:41 am
Nathaniel PLATINUM, Huntsville, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"For there is nothing either good or bad, but thinking makes it so." --William Shakespeare

Nothing short of pure excellence!

Evvyon SILVER said...
on Jun. 26 2009 at 4:48 pm
Evvyon SILVER, Richardson, Texas
9 articles 3 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love never dies a natural death. It dies because we don't know how to replenish its source. It dies of blindness and errors and betrayals. It dies of illness and wounds; it dies of weariness, of witherings, of tarnishings.

The change in rhyme scheme adds power to the ending. Very deep, I like this poem immensely!

on Jun. 24 2009 at 1:00 pm
write4life_0912 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
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This is amazing!! Its soo sophisticated!!! Very deep! Nice

on Jun. 24 2009 at 1:26 am
Courtney Billow BRONZE, Richfield, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments
I enjoyed this poem.

Defiance in a world I paint- was my favorite line.

Great job =]

on Jun. 23 2009 at 5:19 pm
camille_1441 PLATINUM, Westerville, Ohio
31 articles 0 photos 48 comments
oooh I like this one, it's very powerful so the fact that the end doesn't rhyme is okay because it's a statement ment to be simply put after a poem that's very complex. Great work!


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