Prey

June 7, 2009
By cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
20 articles 0 photos 64 comments

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Be the best you an be as you can see i try to be by writing poetry.


You can prey anytime throw the good,
throw the bad and throw the sad.
Dont only prey throw those deppresing times prey throw the good time.
Prey Prey Prey
Just say what you need to say
Then you’ll be O,K
what ever you need just call on the lord
if you just won a Million dollor stop and prey.
Just say in Jesus Name and he'll get your massage.
One more thing I have to say, Prey



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on Oct. 29 2009 at 12:22 pm
JasonsBaby GOLD, Spencer, West Virginia
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when i get mad i tend to tell people to "go suck a fart"

ps. you spelled pray wrong, but its okay.

on Oct. 29 2009 at 12:21 pm
JasonsBaby GOLD, Spencer, West Virginia
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when i get mad i tend to tell people to "go suck a fart"

you spelled through wrong, but other than that you did great . Besides, your twelve, no body's perfect at spelling and your a GREAT writer! keep up the good work.

on Jun. 29 2009 at 11:54 pm
LakeTownGirl GOLD, Lake Stevens, Washington
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"Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened." -Dr. Seuss

This one kind of confused me. I wasn't sure if you were trying to write a conventions free poem or if you had some grammar or spelling mistakes. i don't want to critise you. i make spelling mistakes all the time. i think i already did haha. I was just a little confused with you using throw. That's like throw a ball. i wasn't sure if you meant through as in going through something.


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