I See

June 7, 2009
By KaylaMariebabie SILVER, Marshalltown, Iowa
KaylaMariebabie SILVER, Marshalltown, Iowa
5 articles 2 photos 9 comments

I see daisies in your eyes,
Beautiful and serene,
Pulsing with your heartbeat,
Like wind,
The pain is unmistakable,
The sorrow is unforgivable,
The happiness makes my heart soar,
It will never be challenged by the others,
Only screened,
The tears are like diamonds,
They will never disappear,
Only turn into something beautiful,
Stars in the night sky,
I see the truth in your daisy eyes,
I see the pain,
I see the sorrow,
I see the screen clear,
And I see the happiness.

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on Nov. 4 2009 at 7:23 pm
MissCharlotteDreamer SILVER, Everett, Massachusetts
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