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I am from ancient whispers

June 6, 2009
By ultrabookworm BRONZE, Equestria, Kentucky
ultrabookworm BRONZE, Equestria, Kentucky
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I am from ancient whispers
the daily bustle
the faraway lands
and the modernness of today

I am from the conquering Asians
the pale Europeans
the liberty of America
and the hope of tomorrow

I am from the battle cries
the yells of the newspaper boy
the peace of two nations
and the haze of forever

I am from the rolling hills
the buzz of a city
the past and the future
and the image of God

I am from war and peace
the greed and generosity
the end and the beginning
and the hate and love of man

I am from dust in the sunbeams
the empty streets
the darkness of evil
and the light of perfection

Thus takes place the creation of a man.



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on Jul. 14 2010 at 12:06 pm
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

 hahaha =P

on Jul. 13 2010 at 10:33 pm
ultrabookworm BRONZE, Equestria, Kentucky
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Thank you! And good job vying for the receptionist. ;P

on Jul. 11 2010 at 5:47 pm
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

i second that motion :)

on May. 1 2010 at 11:30 pm
writerscramp01 GOLD, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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WOW! you are soo talented! i decided to check out some of yoru work and im glad i did! im giving this a favorite star

on Nov. 9 2009 at 9:04 pm
NorthernWriter, Fargo, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
"Only dead fish swim with the stream"

I noticed this is somewhat patriotic in a way. It reminds me of the 1800s and early 1900s. you could add something in there about gold paved streets and dreams...long e rhyme there if you go for rhymes. people came here expecting gold paved streets. just a thought, no need to feel expected to obey!

on Sep. 8 2009 at 3:49 pm
ultrabookworm BRONZE, Equestria, Kentucky
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Thanks for commenting! I also really like your writings- they provoke so much thought and can mean so many different things to different people.

on Sep. 7 2009 at 8:08 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
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wow really cool. In fact, i really really like this. It makes you think back into the past of where did we come from? and also intertwining with the present... really awesome!

and thanks for commenting on my work too!