Shaking Palms

June 6, 2009
By xxbakerbabyxx DIAMOND, Coatesville, Pennsylvania
xxbakerbabyxx DIAMOND, Coatesville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"life will only controll youh if youh let it"

Noticable and unbelieveable shatter
Nothing but her shaking palms show her hearts brutaly batterd. Everytime she shes the face thats who she thinks about at night ever so calm. The result of loving a person too much for the pain. Broken viens and shaking palms. Her palms used to fit perfectly in his. Hers now shake and his are happily free, shes not tough enough for this.She just wanted him to know that he could always come back if she still meant something. she didnt want it to be like this at all tell her broken heart to explain that to her shaking palms.

The author's comments:
i hope you like this one change is a if u cant deal with whats changed espeacially if it meant alot to you for thigs to stay the way they were cuz u finaly soung comfort so theres my lil advise i guess to show you i understand comment please

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