My own sedation

June 6, 2009
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Will you miss me?
as i sit here crying
as i sit here no longer wanting
the love i feel.

will you think about me?
as i lay here dying
as i lay here only wanting
to heal, Oh! to heal!

will you even speak of me?
utter my name?
ask how i am?
anything?....anything? you won't
you wont remember; love once shared
my heart is crumbling
my love unspared

A healing period
what i need
my own sedation

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sunrise_faerie said...
Aug. 30, 2010 at 2:43 pm

i love this! i'm going to check out more of your work :D


xBaByGiRrL22x said...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 1:21 pm
wow i luv this. its so meaningful & deep! i had 2 read it twicee;)) plz keep writing
isaa pants. said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 8:37 pm
i read this again :)
jessicaconner said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 5:56 pm
this is great. Its like im living in the moment, it seems very painful. Great job.
isaa pants. said...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 9:14 pm
wow robert. that was a great poem. the questions make it dramatic. good job :) i love it.
DJMarin said...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 8:56 pm
Wonderful pattern of symbols. Excellent work! You seem to get more hopeful every article.
emilyj93 said...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 8:18 pm
wow I love your use of rhetorical questioning! This piece flows so well, good job!
Shannon_ said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 11:56 am
this is really great i love it! your work is just one after another great writing! 5 out 5
lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 21, 2009 at 11:00 am
Oh my goodness. This is amazing. I feel exactly the same way as these words describe. I love this poem. Good job. I'm going to make it my favorite.
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