When?

June 5, 2009
By kapella PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
kapella PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Be optimistic dont you be a grumpy when the road gets bumpy just smile smile smile dont wear a frown its never in style be optimistic and smile! - Anywhere But Here


When will it end
Why won't it stop
Stop in the end but when
Can't stop too ontop
Pushing you under
Falling apart
Thoughts just wander
Pain does start
When will it end
It will end in the end but the end is when?



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on Jun. 30 2009 at 11:53 pm
Jesus_Freak_And_Proud_Of_It GOLD, Harrisburg, North Carolina
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I like the second half of this, though I don't really understand the first. Maybe some punctuation would help? I just didn't know how to read it, and that kind of took away from the poem.

Overall it was wonderful though. I like the content, and the meaning.




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