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When will it end
Why won't it stop
Stop in the end but when
Can't stop too ontop
Pushing you under
Falling apart
Thoughts just wander
Pain does start
When will it end
It will end in the end but the end is when?





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Jesus_Freak_And_Proud_Of_It said...
Jun. 30, 2009 at 11:53 pm
I like the second half of this, though I don't really understand the first. Maybe some punctuation would help? I just didn't know how to read it, and that kind of took away from the poem.
Overall it was wonderful though. I like the content, and the meaning.
 
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