Imitation

June 10, 2009
By firstsnowfalls DIAMOND, Marcellus, New York
firstsnowfalls DIAMOND, Marcellus, New York
51 articles 6 photos 105 comments

The lamp
in my room.
is painted to resemble the sun,
a pitiful recreation of the natural wonder.
Plastic glow-n-the dark stars
scattering the pale blue ceiling.
Try as you might
to recreate the sight
no matter what you do
it is to no avail
you cannot recreate the feeling.



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on Aug. 11 2010 at 8:59 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

You're welcome and thank you! I understand the whole "rare occasion" haha cuz on rare occasion people comment my work and I love it when people do even if they're harshly critisizing it! haha

on Aug. 11 2010 at 2:27 pm
firstsnowfalls DIAMOND, Marcellus, New York
51 articles 6 photos 105 comments

Thank you so so much!!! I love it when (on rare occasion) people comment on them, and I'm so glad you like it! I get to have a little confidence booster :)

I'll have to look at some of yours!


on Aug. 5 2010 at 1:13 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

This is great! I am a fan of your poetry! :D




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