Imitation

June 10, 2009
The lamp
in my room.
is painted to resemble the sun,
a pitiful recreation of the natural wonder.
Plastic glow-n-the dark stars
scattering the pale blue ceiling.
Try as you might
to recreate the sight
no matter what you do
it is to no avail
you cannot recreate the feeling.





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alanacarlene said...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 1:13 pm
This is great! I am a fan of your poetry! :D
 
firstsnowfalls This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 2:27 pm

Thank you so so much!!! I love it when (on rare occasion) people comment on them, and I'm so glad you like it! I get to have a little confidence booster :)

I'll have to look at some of yours!

 
alanacarlene replied...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 8:59 pm
You're welcome and thank you! I understand the whole "rare occasion" haha cuz on rare occasion people comment my work and I love it when people do even if they're harshly critisizing it! haha
 
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