Holding On

May 26, 2009
By Carissamariew PLATINUM, Cape Coral, Florida
Carissamariew PLATINUM, Cape Coral, Florida
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Oh I’m holding on when you’re weak
And I’m just begging you to speak
Because fairytales do not really exist and
Forever will those scars remain on your wrists.


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on Jun. 20 2009 at 1:50 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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hey, this poem is short but covers a lot, good job (: it might've been better if you expanded it more though, maybe a couple more quatrains?

on Jun. 20 2009 at 1:31 am
dirtbiker2012 SILVER, Lawson, Missouri
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nice, but it should be longer!!!




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