Broken

May 30, 2009
By Jessica Gibson PLATINUM, Centerville, Ohio
Jessica Gibson PLATINUM, Centerville, Ohio
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I did it,
I finally did it,
And it was a total mistake.
Right now I am totally numb,
I can't even feel my own heart beat.
I couldn't believe what I heard,
"Um...um...no...I don't really know you...".
Those words cut into my heart,
Ripping out all hope I had left.
I couldn't believe you said that,
You have known me since you were 3.
I got over the “Um…um…no”,
But the “I don’t really know you” left me numb.
I just sat there,
Numb,
Still,
Broken.
My whole world fell apart,
Gone within a few seconds.



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on Jun. 20 2009 at 10:25 pm
KaylaMarie SILVER, West Sunbury, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
you dont know what youve got until its gone

i have felt the same way. actually it was just the other day. i know wat you mean. oh and by the way that is a great poem. my mom always told me keep trying to improve but youre well on your way to a great future

on Jun. 19 2009 at 2:33 am
Sandy Karim BRONZE, El Cajon, California
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AWWWWWWWWWWWW:( your poem gave mee chilllsssss...

it was soo cute.

erikaee SILVER said...
on Jun. 17 2009 at 6:52 pm
erikaee SILVER, Lake Charles, Louisiana
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aww. this is really depressing

on Jun. 17 2009 at 4:42 pm
tigeress3 PLATINUM, Dayton, Ohio
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Such a sad poem. Love the ending.




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