Broken

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I did it,
I finally did it,
And it was a total mistake.
Right now I am totally numb,
I can't even feel my own heart beat.
I couldn't believe what I heard,
"Um...um...no...I don't really know you...".
Those words cut into my heart,
Ripping out all hope I had left.
I couldn't believe you said that,
You have known me since you were 3.
I got over the “Um…um…no”,
But the “I don’t really know you” left me numb.
I just sat there,
Numb,
Still,
Broken.
My whole world fell apart,
Gone within a few seconds.





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KaylaMarie said...
Jun. 20, 2009 at 10:25 pm
i have felt the same way. actually it was just the other day. i know wat you mean. oh and by the way that is a great poem. my mom always told me keep trying to improve but youre well on your way to a great future
 
Sandy K. said...
Jun. 19, 2009 at 2:33 am
AWWWWWWWWWWWW:( your poem gave mee chilllsssss...
it was soo cute.
 
tigeress3 said...
Jun. 17, 2009 at 4:42 pm
Such a sad poem. Love the ending.
 
erika E. said...
Jun. 17, 2009 at 6:52 pm
aww. this is really depressing
 
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