oxymoronic daydreams

May 30, 2009
By hellozina GOLD, Boise, Idaho
hellozina GOLD, Boise, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"If everything seems under control, you're just not going fast enough." - Mario Andretti


There's a cloud, high above,
Where the moon overpowers the sun
And day and night combine
And the birds don't fly
Because they don't know they can
And gravity pushes you away,
But, seemingly effortlessly, you stay put
Because of a simple disire, deep within,
To remain.



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hellozina GOLD said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 8:53 pm
hellozina GOLD, Boise, Idaho
14 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If everything seems under control, you're just not going fast enough." - Mario Andretti

thank you :)

hellozina GOLD said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 8:52 pm
hellozina GOLD, Boise, Idaho
14 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If everything seems under control, you're just not going fast enough." - Mario Andretti

thank you :)

hellozina GOLD said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 8:51 pm
hellozina GOLD, Boise, Idaho
14 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If everything seems under control, you're just not going fast enough." - Mario Andretti

thank you :)

on Jun. 17 2009 at 9:43 pm
Hay_Wire PLATINUM, Independence, Missouri
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wow. i started to read it cause it sounds like somethign i would say.. and it was so deep .so much deeper then my sarcastic comments.. i loved it.

erikaee SILVER said...
on Jun. 17 2009 at 6:54 pm
erikaee SILVER, Lake Charles, Louisiana
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really pretty

on Jun. 17 2009 at 2:06 am
PenOnPaper BRONZE, Lee&#39s Summit, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm all in favor of keeping dangerous weapons out of the hands of fools. Let's start with typewriters." ~Frank Lloyd Wright

It's a really beautiful thing to think about, but I wish that it was longer. The last part is my favorite, because I think that's true of everyone. How everyone wants to be remembered. Nice work. :)


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