oxymoronic daydreams

There's a cloud, high above,
Where the moon overpowers the sun
And day and night combine
And the birds don't fly
Because they don't know they can
And gravity pushes you away,
But, seemingly effortlessly, you stay put
Because of a simple disire, deep within,
To remain.





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HayWire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 17, 2009 at 9:43 pm
wow. i started to read it cause it sounds like somethign i would say.. and it was so deep .so much deeper then my sarcastic comments.. i loved it.
 
hellozina This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 8:51 pm
thank you :)
 
erika E. said...
Jun. 17, 2009 at 6:54 pm
really pretty
 
hellozina This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 8:53 pm
thank you :)
 
PenOnPaper This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 17, 2009 at 2:06 am
It's a really beautiful thing to think about, but I wish that it was longer. The last part is my favorite, because I think that's true of everyone. How everyone wants to be remembered. Nice work. :)
 
hellozina This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 8:52 pm
thank you :)
 
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