May 30, 2009
By Jonathanlloyd92 BRONZE, St.peters, Missouri
Jonathanlloyd92 BRONZE, St.peters, Missouri
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Many days go by.
More and more,gloomy,
Leaves on the tree hang motionless.
Air begins to cool as the sun fades.
The moon incandescent.
Children return from a day of playing.
Adults and i come out in the evening air.
Chirp, chirp of the crickets intensify with the sleeping sun.
Traces of the breeze of the sacred night run down my spine.
I then begin to realize the value of life.
I think about all the mistakes, achievements Ive made.
I wonder,if this life is worth living?
Is it meaningless?

The author's comments:
I wrote this sometime this year. It is my feelings about life.

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on Dec. 10 2009 at 2:57 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

this is great! I totally relate to this, sometimes i feel like there's no point to life at all, and you've really put that into words in a great way! Love it!

on Jun. 20 2009 at 10:33 pm
KaylaMarie SILVER, West Sunbury, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
you dont know what youve got until its gone

i think the same way. check out my poem, "the fight against the world". by the way you have a great talent

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