Foolish Me

May 30, 2009
By Sandy Karim BRONZE, El Cajon, California
Sandy Karim BRONZE, El Cajon, California
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Your lips I can no longer kiss,
You touch I can no longer miss,
You arms I can no longer embrace,
You love I can no longer hold in place.
I’m foolish for believing you
I know you were a fool.
I got caught up in your lies,
You tore me up inside.
You said you’d never hurt me…
But you always seemed to make me cry.
You said there wouldn’t be another girl but I..
Now look who is by your side..
I know I was bossy,
its only because I truly cared.
I know my love for you was drama,
But that’s only because my drama was love.
I believed you truly cared,
I believed you’d always be there,
I believed you would be different,
I believed in your love…
But foolish me..
You replaced my love,
With another.
You see..
You were a risk,
A heart aching risk,
It was a mistake to think you were real,
But I ’m glad you entered my life.
I am stronger now,
Cause now I can see,
Love is but a truly foolish mistake.
Love is but a foolish trait,
Love is merely a matter of
of Give and Take.
Maybe one day,
True Love will prove me wrong,
But for right now
love is my unwritten song.

The author's comments:
This was written a while back when i had my heart broken by my first love.

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This article has 2 comments.

on Jul. 5 2009 at 2:43 am
IheartAsuka BRONZE, Rockland, Maine
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That was amazing. I think that I can relate to your feelings very well.

on Jun. 19 2009 at 2:29 am
Sandy Karim BRONZE, El Cajon, California
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments


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