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May 28, 2009
By project827 GOLD, Portage, Michigan
project827 GOLD, Portage, Michigan
13 articles 1 photo 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Real Revolution Starts At Learning, If You're Not Angry, Then You Are Not Paying Attention" - Tim McIlrath


By finest rock

an intimate show
Although
old
factory and
winter created

show

One of it’s most
wonderful time to be alive.

Ashes

follows the

peak of
power “It is really
interesting to me
watching the
changes

personal
and historical”

release

change
with the music
the music came alive
Roaring Impossible Blue Sky
beautifully in a

sample of things

burning it’s summer
complete with

nearby

festival
appearances
In addition to

release

In response
currently
in it’s entirety
The measure was taken

before it’s

release

date.


The author's comments:
I've started to go at my poetry in a slightly different way. I hope you guys enjoy it, and any feedback regarding my new style would be greatly appreciated. thanks everybody.

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on Sep. 17 2009 at 8:28 pm
dramalover121 SILVER, Mattawan, Michigan
7 articles 5 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars." ~Les Brown

I love it. It flows wonderfully and is written very well. :)

on Aug. 4 2009 at 11:40 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

this is really good. i like the flow of the words. nice job. comment on my work :)

on Jul. 24 2009 at 2:38 pm
Dandelion PLATINUM, Franklin, Massachusetts
20 articles 8 photos 173 comments
I like the new style; it gives a completely different feel to the words and how they're said.


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