What's Needed Most

May 28, 2009
By Milez Oblescon BRONZE, Carthage, North Carolina
Milez Oblescon BRONZE, Carthage, North Carolina
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I wish you could be here,
to see how very clear,
it was for you to stay,
instead you move away,
nom I've become a man,
one that has no plan,
but one thing is certain,
I'm not going to draw that curtain,
I had a girlfriend,
and she became my wife,
she became my world,
she became my life,
I won't hurt her,
like you did my mother,
and leave when I needed you most.

The author's comments:
there is some truth to every poem that I write. most are of the people that I see. well this one was inspired by the determination and love for my girlfriend. I hope that you enjoy it.

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