Missing You

June 3, 2009
By Richa BRONZE, Brampton, Ontario, Other
Richa BRONZE, Brampton, Ontario, Other
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Something is missing from my life and dreams,
I search for it endlessly in the lost realms.
Trapped in the invisible void my thoughts take me away,
Like a pagan I drift from every single way.
There’s no place to live the life I had dreamt.

Why did this happen when it felt right?
The await which lasted centuries was forgotten in a single fight.
All was lost and shattered in a blink,
This heartache wouldn’t take more than centuries to fade I think.
Just a little bit more than few thousand years geared,
Before I forget what it was that we shared.

I reminisce the faithful friendship which kept us tight,
After every heartrending night together we witnessed light.
Also I miss those heart warming talks,
While the sun set in the horizon during our autumn walks.

And time drifted while we were together through changing seasons,
Now when I think why everything changed,
A voice answers back, ‘not too many reasons’.

The feeling of compliance when you were near,
Is what I look for every single day as it passes by,
I search for that caressing shade while we napped under the trees
Now what am I left to do with those precious memories?
I think about those beautiful moments we shared with a sorrowful sigh.

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on Jun. 30 2009 at 3:43 pm
Dandelion PLATINUM, Franklin, Massachusetts
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The words in this were just beautiful! Maybe some of them could be moved around, to make it flow better, but other than that this is lovely, and I agree, you have outstanding diction.

breezer11 GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2009 at 6:18 pm
breezer11 GOLD, Cinci, Ohio
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hi! i saw ur comment on my "forced smiles" its not that school is bad its just that friends there are bad. i shoulda made that a little more clear on my piece. thanks for the comments!

on Jun. 16 2009 at 4:03 pm
storyofmylife PLATINUM, Mt. Olive, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
If life gives you lemons. Paint them green and pretend they're limes.

i loved this...

beautifully written... made me remember a relationship i was in once... you have outstanding diction... keep it up!

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