Afraid

June 2, 2009
By betty1997 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
betty1997 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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When I first saw you
I was afraid to meet you
When I first met you
I was afraid to hold you
When I first held you
I was afraid to kiss you
When I first kissed you
I was afraid to love you
And now that i love you
I'm afraid to lose you


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DesTiNeD said...
on May. 26 2011 at 12:26 pm

"when i first met you,

i feared loving you.

and now that i have,

i fear losing you." ~ this is a poem from a book i read three years ago. it's really similar. i'm not saying yours isn't good, i'm just saying they're really, really alike.


amyxu said...
on Jun. 25 2009 at 11:51 pm
This is a very honest poem and I can really admire writers who put their heart into their work like that. Good job!

on Jun. 25 2009 at 12:44 am
betty1997 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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nice job




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