He was there...

June 1, 2009
By Stephanie Nidish BRONZE, Grimshaw, Other
Stephanie Nidish BRONZE, Grimshaw, Other
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I'll start with the rain
'cause rain is something that is real.
It obscures without lying.

When nobody was there he always was.
He was a big part of my life, and even though it didn't seem like it...he took away the numbness.

...And made me feel less alone...



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E.Lee GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2009 at 9:33 pm
E.Lee GOLD, Akron, Ohio
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i agree with palo:)

it could use work i guess, but its got potential. i liked it:)

on Jun. 11 2009 at 5:19 pm
PaloVerde1 GOLD, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"Years later, I look back and thing what the hell I was doing."

Le morceau agréable, peu l'un. Could use a little work, but the meaning is *amazing* and it made me think.




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