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I'll start with the rain
'cause rain is something that is real.
It obscures without lying.

When nobody was there he always was.
He was a big part of my life, and even though it didn't seem like it...he took away the numbness.

...And made me feel less alone...





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<3::wish4wings::<3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 14, 2009 at 9:33 pm
i agree with palo:)
it could use work i guess, but its got potential. i liked it:)
 
PaloVerde1 said...
Jun. 11, 2009 at 5:19 pm
Le morceau agréable, peu l'un. Could use a little work, but the meaning is *amazing* and it made me think.
 
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