May 31, 2009
By Leana Marinhas BRONZE, Toronto, Other
Leana Marinhas BRONZE, Toronto, Other
1 article 0 photos 0 comments

Driving across from what we thought we would make it through.
Only seconds away from
The snow blowing like we were flying through time.
The confusion of not only our surroundings but in ourselves.
Not at all were we speeding, but that miss of the red light became our fault.
My mother and I were dead cold to the earth, only the bright light was what we could see. As the car spun in a 360, and hit a tree.
The pillow plunged power towards our faces.
Struck cold. No movement, just black.
The sound of braking, screaming, crying has been muted away from my ears.
Until, eyes opened, pinned straight down on the stretcher connected to all that was inhuman. For I did look inhuman.
Praying to God that I can see, touch, smell and hear.
Only thoughts of the images playing like a slideshow are in my brain.
It will soon run out of battery
because I chose too.

Similar Articles


This article has 2 comments.

Fangz PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 12 2009 at 1:03 pm
Fangz PLATINUM, Ware, Massachusetts
37 articles 15 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
In necessariis unitas, in dubiis libertas, in omnibus caritas.

Peculiar take on a traffic collision.

on Jun. 11 2009 at 12:47 am
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

Did this happen to you? It's a great idea anyhow. Awesome poem too

Swoon Reads

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!