Friend

May 31, 2009
By Shailja GOLD, Patna, Other
Shailja GOLD, Patna, Other
13 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
The fear of rejection is worse than rejection itself ~ Nora Profit


When I was all alone,
Tired of hearing all the sarcastic tones
In friendship I had lost all trust
Into silent tears I would often burst.
Friends were gone, all seemed lost
There was nothing to smile at
And no one to cry with.
In the huge school, within its green gate
Which seemed more like the bars of a jail,
I was all alone
Among the thousands, I was friendless
Everything seemed to be in a mess.
The true me was hidden behind a mask
Which for me was is indeed a tedious task.
I had more than most wished for
The badge of a captain and the class’ star
Yet I felt I was all alone
Tired of hearing all the sarcastic tones
Then she came like a shining light
My trust in friendship was again fresh and bright
How, when, where you did it I know not
But in me, a change was brought
For the best, and not for the worst
I was filled with a new trust.
Off fell my mask and behold;
The real I was once again mould.
What you did for me I shall never forget
I shall always thank god that we met!


The author's comments:
this is sumthin i penned down on paper one day but the medium was not the ink but my heart...it is something for a real special friend...i hope u like it n may b some shall b reminded of their own true friends...

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on Jun. 23 2009 at 8:22 pm
kapella PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Be optimistic dont you be a grumpy when the road gets bumpy just smile smile smile dont wear a frown its never in style be optimistic and smile! - Anywhere But Here

wow! I really liked this it has true meaning within it. Keep writing as I'm sure you will. Also thanks for commenting on my writing it means a lot.

Shailja GOLD said...
on Jun. 18 2009 at 2:24 pm
Shailja GOLD, Patna, Other
13 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
The fear of rejection is worse than rejection itself ~ Nora Profit

well...may b round october or nov....when v hav diwali n dussehra...u sure to find the whole country lightd durin dussehra...!

gud to see u in love wid india...lol

hope it remains the same aftr ur visit n tht india dsnt dissappoint u...

on Jun. 17 2009 at 7:43 pm
Lauren . BRONZE, Pompton Plains, New Jersey
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thats soo cool

ill definitely look into finding some books

is there any specific time that you recommend ;]

Shailja GOLD said...
on Jun. 17 2009 at 10:05 am
Shailja GOLD, Patna, Other
13 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
The fear of rejection is worse than rejection itself ~ Nora Profit

well...it feels absolutly gr8 to b appreciatd by u ppl...

n dear lauren i absolutly dont mind tellin u all bout india...but da fact is india is too colorful to b spoken bout in a few words...every part of india shows a different shade...it is all too vast and diverse...but at da same tym thr is actually unity in diversity...but if u r really interestd in india u may go ahead n read some books bout india...n thn if u gt a chance do visit it...u will not b disappointd specially if u cum durin festive times...

Jaquie BRONZE said...
on Jun. 13 2009 at 8:46 pm
Jaquie BRONZE, West Palm Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
This is certainly one of my favorites: "I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes." -2 Samuel 6:22

Must be a great friend. Don't loose her(him?).

God bless,

...,

on Jun. 13 2009 at 8:24 pm
Lauren . BRONZE, Pompton Plains, New Jersey
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this is awesomee! =]



random question -- hope you dont mind me asking

what's life like in india?

I really want to go there one day

on Jun. 13 2009 at 3:22 pm
pinksage33 BRONZE, Woodstock, New York
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Amazing!!!

CharviK BRONZE said...
on Jun. 13 2009 at 5:04 am
CharviK BRONZE, Mumbai, Other
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wonderful poem!

amyxu said...
on Jun. 12 2009 at 6:24 pm
Wow, I can totally relate to this!!!! Nice job!


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