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When I was all alone,
Tired of hearing all the sarcastic tones
In friendship I had lost all trust
Into silent tears I would often burst.
Friends were gone, all seemed lost
There was nothing to smile at
And no one to cry with.
In the huge school, within its green gate
Which seemed more like the bars of a jail,
I was all alone
Among the thousands, I was friendless
Everything seemed to be in a mess.
The true me was hidden behind a mask
Which for me was is indeed a tedious task.
I had more than most wished for
The badge of a captain and the class’ star
Yet I felt I was all alone
Tired of hearing all the sarcastic tones
Then she came like a shining light
My trust in friendship was again fresh and bright
How, when, where you did it I know not
But in me, a change was brought
For the best, and not for the worst
I was filled with a new trust.
Off fell my mask and behold;
The real I was once again mould.
What you did for me I shall never forget
I shall always thank god that we met!

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kapella This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 23, 2009 at 8:22 pm
wow! I really liked this it has true meaning within it. Keep writing as I'm sure you will. Also thanks for commenting on my writing it means a lot.
Shailja said...
Jun. 18, 2009 at 2:24 pm
well...may b round october or nov....when v hav diwali n dussehra...u sure to find the whole country lightd durin dussehra...!
gud to see u in love wid
hope it remains the same aftr ur visit n tht india dsnt dissappoint u...
Lauren G. said...
Jun. 17, 2009 at 7:43 pm
thats soo cool
ill definitely look into finding some books
is there any specific time that you recommend ;]
Shailja said...
Jun. 17, 2009 at 10:05 am feels absolutly gr8 to b appreciatd by u ppl...
n dear lauren i absolutly dont mind tellin u all bout india...but da fact is india is too colorful to b spoken bout in a few words...every part of india shows a different is all too vast and diverse...but at da same tym thr is actually unity in diversity...but if u r really interestd in india u may go ahead n read some books bout india...n thn if u gt a chance do visit it...u will not b disappointd specially if u cum duri... (more »)
Jaquie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 13, 2009 at 8:46 pm
Must be a great friend. Don't loose her(him?).
God bless,
Lauren G. said...
Jun. 13, 2009 at 8:24 pm
this is awesomee! =]

random question -- hope you dont mind me asking
what's life like in india?
I really want to go there one day
pinksage33 said...
Jun. 13, 2009 at 3:22 pm
ElusiveEve said...
Jun. 13, 2009 at 5:04 am
wonderful poem!
amyxu said...
Jun. 12, 2009 at 6:24 pm
Wow, I can totally relate to this!!!! Nice job!
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