He Told Me In Whispers

June 2, 2009
By if.i.had.eyes. SILVER, Plainwell, Michigan
if.i.had.eyes. SILVER, Plainwell, Michigan
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"Don't break me," he asked me, "I've been broken too many
times to recover from this one.
"You've got me, kid. There's no going back because there's no way that I'm missin'
out on this chance at something that's real,
something that could last forever.
"I knew from the second we spoke to each other, that you deserved something better
than the way he treated you,
it's true.
You know you weren't good together.
"So answer me this, dollface, you want space?
Or you want I should make you some dinner?"

The author's comments:
My boyfriend told me this one night. I thought it was rather poetic. Of course at the time it didn't rhyme and all of it wasn't said at once but I just needed to share. I hope it makes you feel warm and fuzzy inside like it did for me.

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