The Endless Darkness of Dispair

June 1, 2009
By brina SILVER, Middletown, Indiana
brina SILVER, Middletown, Indiana
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The darkness slowly crept over her soul
As she waited for her time to depart
The endless darkness devoured her
She was brought to the place of ENDLESS DESPAIR
I saw her she frowned while I only smiled
Now we are both trapped in this endless blank dark after life


The author's comments:
My friend and i decided we should write a peom. this is the result. she relates very well to darkness and despair. She is not the prekiest of people but, she has been my friend since second grade.

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brina SILVER said...
on Jun. 14 2009 at 10:45 pm
brina SILVER, Middletown, Indiana
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This peom is how my friend and I relate. For she has never known her dad but I have known my my whole life and he has never actually been a dad to me. so we are both stuck in the endless darkness of despair

on Jun. 12 2009 at 7:57 pm
GreenWriter826 PLATINUM, McAllen, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
''Their fruits like honey to the throat
But poison in the blood'' - Christina Georgina Rossetti "Goblin Market"

hey...im the the girl who wrote the story about the mom...my insperation was my mom...thanks for the comment...this poem you wrote was very good...what did you mean...




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