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Suspended

A moment
A breath
The blink
Of an eye

Still
Motionless
The utter freedom
Of that flexibility

A flip
A twirl
A turn
Frozen

In midair
Just
There
Like that

A clap
A step
Leaves falling
From a tree

Back on
Your toes
Picturesque
No more

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Ren-P. said...
Jan. 6, 2010 at 10:47 pm
That's really good. I love the imagery.
 
unearthlyhaphazard said...
Aug. 8, 2009 at 12:17 am
Once again, I thank you, TheUnknownGuest. I really just listed everything that I thought of while I toyed with the keys.
 
TheUnknownGuest said...
Aug. 7, 2009 at 5:55 pm
I really like it!! It's the perfect amount to make since. Not to much and not too little! Loved it!
 
unearthlyhaphazard said...
Aug. 5, 2009 at 5:44 pm
Thank you so much, tigeress3!
 
tigeress3 said...
Aug. 5, 2009 at 3:59 pm
Wow. That's all I'm gonna say.
 
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