Hot Mess.

May 31, 2009
By Sultana GOLD, Albertson, New York
Sultana GOLD, Albertson, New York
10 articles 0 photos 17 comments

We shall stay together forever in unholy matrimony.
How could you do this?
What about all the times you said you loved me?
How could I do this?
How could we do this?
More importantly, how did we do this?
Unofficial declarations of love.
“I love you” has no reason to exist anymore.
Ergo, it doesn’t.


An attempt at camaraderie?
More like rape of the mind.
Lack of emotion,
Lack of rhythm,
Lack of rhyme,
Lack of everything I've ever worked for.
Lack of everything I've ever given up to you,
For you,
Along with you.
Anarchy of our former psyche.


Can you feel me falling?
Rushing past you down the drain of what's left.
I'm falling down to nowhere,
And that's when I realize:
None of this matters.
You do not matter. I do not matter.
This attempt at poetry does not matter.
But can you still feel me falling?

The author's comments:
This is what comes out of my brain at 4 in the morning.

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emilys.owns said...
on Jan. 18 2011 at 9:33 pm

Favorite.

Omegle REPRESENT!


on May. 15 2010 at 10:04 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

No problem at all!:)and you should post more of your work soon!I'll deff read it!!!:)

Sultana GOLD said...
on May. 15 2010 at 9:53 pm
Sultana GOLD, Albertson, New York
10 articles 0 photos 17 comments
Thank you veryveryvery much, dear! Your comments are truly appreciated and shall inspire me to write more :)

on May. 15 2010 at 9:47 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

*Claps* very nice, I've felt like that the past few months and so I really relate!:)You're a good writer!




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