Water

May 31, 2009
By Matthew BRONZE, Dublin, Ohio
Matthew BRONZE, Dublin, Ohio
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Dripping slowly,
never stopping.
Crystal drips,
always dropping.
Down,
Down,
and deeper still,
water growing with a will.

Pools of silver,
against the land.
Dirsturbed with ripples,
by my hand.
Shimmer shiver,
cold as ice,
splashing,
not just once,
but twice.

Twisting,
Turning,
like a snake.
Not effected when we make,
efforts to stop it,
we can try.
Rustled by the soft wind's sigh.

Thicker,
Wider,
faster still.
Past perhaps,
an old wheat mill.
Blue lape lupaz,
touched with green.
Always crisp,
always clean.

From brook,
to stream,
to river running.
Ever quick and ever cunning.
Finally done,
and out to sea.
I love the water,
it's so like me.



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on May. 16 2010 at 12:12 pm
writergirl22 SILVER, In, New York
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"Never frown. You never know who's falling in love with your smile." -Anounymous

This is great! I love how it rhymes so nicely!

on Aug. 6 2009 at 2:28 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

great job. it flowed really nicely and it really showed the beauty of water...awesome!!! check out some of my work please :) you are a great writer!

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on Jul. 25 2009 at 8:35 pm
mwatt12 SILVER, Elizabeth, Pennsylvania
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"A creative man is motivated by the desire to achieve, not by the desire to beat others. " -Ayn Rand

Wow. I love the way everything flowed together. Great work, I really loved it.

on Jun. 24 2009 at 7:49 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

LOVED IT SO MUCH! YOU ARE TALENTED!

on Jun. 15 2009 at 8:21 pm
storyofmylife PLATINUM, Mt. Olive, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
If life gives you lemons. Paint them green and pretend they're limes.

this was pretty amazing..

i liked the flow of the rhyming..

it reminded me of water flowing..

beautiful...




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