The Immensity of My Heart

May 31, 2009
By Macy Amsden SILVER, Wichita, Kansas
Macy Amsden SILVER, Wichita, Kansas
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sun.moon.rain.star
love.hate.depression.happiness
alone.selfless.selfishness.kindness
want.need.heard.laughter
shine.care.together.apart
secrets.forgivness.ignorance.tolerance
lonliness.blindness.jealousy.betrale
sorry.sunrise.time.healing
friendship.soulmate.lover.sister
words.wounds.hope.reason
understanding.pain.smiles.tears
The Immensity of My Heart



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on Feb. 4 2010 at 7:04 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

I think the idea is good, but I don't think you executed it very well. If you're going to list a ton of words you need to do it in a poetic way. It was just like a long list. I did like the words you used though. You just need to organize them more creatively.




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