The 7 Things I Hate About You

May 31, 2009
By storyofmylife PLATINUM, Mt. Olive, Alabama
storyofmylife PLATINUM, Mt. Olive, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
If life gives you lemons. Paint them green and pretend they're limes.

1. I hate the way you made me feel,
2. And the way you made me laugh,
3. I hate the way you made me happy,
You can have those memories back.
4. I hate the way I remember your touch,
5. And the softness of your kiss,
6. I hate the way you looked at me,
7. And the way your all I miss.
So now I try to forget you, and all that
You did. Your love was like an open box,
So now I close the lid.

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on Feb. 10 2010 at 9:17 pm
WriteForLove GOLD, New Iberia, Louisiana
13 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Laugh as much as you breathe and love as long as you live."

Thank you for commenting on my stories! This is exactly my feelings...except I could list a million reasons I hate him...and probably more as to why I love him! But this is really good and you are an amazing poet!!! Please keep writing and I'll keep reading!

Nayr139 said...
on Jun. 18 2009 at 7:44 pm
i love this. and how dare miley cyrus steal your idea LOL thanks for the comment on my new poems and the twisted fairy tale poem isnt spaced right... its all scattered. anyway if you read my pinwheels poem know that its like someone shuffle the sentences...idk im going to try and fix both of them and im going to contiue to read your EPIC poetry


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