Friendship

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A long lasting friendship is very worthwhile,
They make you laugh and make you smile.
They keep you happy on many a blue days,
That warmth in your heart always stays.

Best friends are loyal and trustworthy,
They’re by your side in your life long journey.
When you’re in your worst dismay,
They’re like a light that guides the way.

A healthy friendship prospers and grows,
Loyalty is the best thing a friend bestows.
All friendships are there to stay,
They are a permanent marker that never wears away.





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Anne K. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 9, 2009 at 1:44 pm
Very good! It was honest, descriptive, and good rhyming! Hope to see more...:)
 
Anjo! said...
Jun. 8, 2009 at 5:13 pm
Nice ryming. very good. i like it
 
Jessie<3 said...
Jun. 7, 2009 at 4:37 pm
I loved it! short but so full of meaning!!! read some of mine if you want...if not dont haha!
 
writing4change said...
Jun. 6, 2009 at 4:38 am
This is sooo cute!!!
 
breezer11 said...
Jun. 6, 2009 at 12:15 am
I love this. it has a nice rythm with the rhyming, and it has a good message! this is beutifully written, great job! your a very good writter, i hope you post some more stuff cuz u reallly have a gift.
 
Chibbie said...
Jun. 5, 2009 at 11:48 pm
hey that was really good . can you comment on my work please?
 
bubblez01234 said...
Jun. 5, 2009 at 9:11 pm
I started to tear up when I read this. I couldn't help but picture my best friends when I read this.
 
e.l.w said...
Jun. 5, 2009 at 8:27 pm
Still needs some work...more detail, maybe.
 
amyxu said...
Jun. 5, 2009 at 7:40 pm
Cute :)
 
Diamond B. said...
Jun. 5, 2009 at 12:35 am
I love the way it rhymes i really like it its awesome.

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MariaMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 4, 2009 at 12:16 am
Love this! The way it Rhymes, the way the words fit. I started to picture my Best-Friends :)
 
lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 3, 2009 at 4:55 pm
Awwww...This is so cute! I love it! A little teary eyed....Good job!

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