Friendship

May 14, 2009
By Connor Richardson BRONZE, Shawnee Mission, Kansas
Connor Richardson BRONZE, Shawnee Mission, Kansas
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A long lasting friendship is very worthwhile,
They make you laugh and make you smile.
They keep you happy on many a blue days,
That warmth in your heart always stays.

Best friends are loyal and trustworthy,
They’re by your side in your life long journey.
When you’re in your worst dismay,
They’re like a light that guides the way.

A healthy friendship prospers and grows,
Loyalty is the best thing a friend bestows.
All friendships are there to stay,
They are a permanent marker that never wears away.


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on Jun. 9 2009 at 1:44 pm
Anne_K PLATINUM, Northfield, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't like lollipops!" -Artemis Fowl

Very good! It was honest, descriptive, and good rhyming! Hope to see more...:)

Anjo! SILVER said...
on Jun. 8 2009 at 5:13 pm
Anjo! SILVER, Roseburg, Oregon
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Nice ryming. very good. i like it

on Jun. 7 2009 at 4:37 pm
MoreThanYouKnow PLATINUM, Camarillo, California
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I loved it! short but so full of meaning!!! read some of mine if you want...if not dont haha!

on Jun. 6 2009 at 4:38 am
ThreeDropsofVenom SILVER, Coventry, Rhode Island
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This is sooo cute!!!

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on Jun. 6 2009 at 12:15 am
breezer11 GOLD, Cinci, Ohio
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I love this. it has a nice rythm with the rhyming, and it has a good message! this is beutifully written, great job! your a very good writter, i hope you post some more stuff cuz u reallly have a gift.

on Jun. 5 2009 at 11:48 pm
Chibbie1 PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Reach for the the moon for if you fail you land amongst the stars :)

hey that was really good . can you comment on my work please?

on Jun. 5 2009 at 9:11 pm
bubblez01234 SILVER, Boise, Idaho
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I started to tear up when I read this. I couldn't help but picture my best friends when I read this.

on Jun. 5 2009 at 8:27 pm
E.L.W. PLATINUM, Glen Allen, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Here's to the crazy ones. The misfits. The rebels.
The troublemakers. The round pegs in the square holes -
the ones who see things differently.
They're not fond of rules and they have no respect for the status quo.
They push the human race forward.

Still needs some work...more detail, maybe.

amyxu said...
on Jun. 5 2009 at 7:40 pm
Cute :)

Diamond born said...
on Jun. 5 2009 at 12:35 am
Diamond born, Brooklyn, New York
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I love the way it rhymes i really like it its awesome.



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on Jun. 4 2009 at 12:16 am
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

Love this! The way it Rhymes, the way the words fit. I started to picture my Best-Friends :)

on Jun. 3 2009 at 4:55 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Awwww...This is so cute! I love it! A little teary eyed....Good job!



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