All One

May 28, 2009
By (*!KissinintheRain!*) SILVER, Tennesse Colony, Texas
(*!KissinintheRain!*) SILVER, Tennesse Colony, Texas
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You slam the door and walk away, as if their's nothing left to say.
You see my tears and smile that smile and quietly ask what's wrong.
As if you don't know.
You cut and tear at yourself, but there's one thing you don't realize.
That you are me, and i am you, and that's my flesh your hurting.

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Anjo! SILVER said...
on Jun. 8 2009 at 5:44 pm
Anjo! SILVER, Roseburg, Oregon
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Ooh, very powerful. You should show this to the person that who you are speaking of. very good. awesome.

on Jun. 7 2009 at 4:21 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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Hey, really nice poem there. It's short, simple, and to the point! I totally understand what's going on and can feel the sadness about. And it's so true. Great poem!

on Jun. 5 2009 at 4:57 pm
carriebearieforever GOLD, Mcallen, Texas
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goodness! thats a really good poem. wow!

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