Rain.

May 28, 2009
By Gema:) BRONZE, South Paris, Maine
Gema:) BRONZE, South Paris, Maine
2 articles 2 photos 7 comments

Like small tears,
Falling from the sky.
Proof that something,
So perfect,
Isn’t.



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on Jun. 14 2009 at 2:38 am
Hannaleiigh PLATINUM, Kittery Point, Maine
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mm thanks for your comment! :)

I love your stuff as well, if you want to talk writing/life whatever sometime, my aim is hannaleiigh.

amyxu said...
on Jun. 12 2009 at 7:24 pm
Short and sweet--I like it!

on Jun. 9 2009 at 2:21 pm
This is emily! lol, and do u want to make firends??? LoOl

on Jun. 9 2009 at 2:13 pm
Jordan Schorr BRONZE, Hebron, Maine
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this is a great poem. it touches the heart and makes you think. GEMA I LOVE YOU AND IM SITTING RIGHT NEXT TO YOU! haha, this is probably the best poem EVER!

SaraB. GOLD said...
on Jun. 8 2009 at 10:28 pm
SaraB. GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Whatever you are, be a good one" Abraham Lincoln

Short, sweet, and to the point. Very touching. Please Keep writing! :)

on Jun. 7 2009 at 5:57 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

Theres something about this poem that lock you in. Its beautiful and just...wow. Great job.

on Jun. 7 2009 at 4:24 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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Yeah, I agree with (lovehate); this really is a great poem and the shortness of it doesn't affect it at all. Simple and still getting the point acress. Nice (:

on Jun. 4 2009 at 6:26 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Wow! You know something? I really loved this. It is so short, but it has the power of a 5 stanza poem. It is so beautiful and I just, adore it. My favorite. Great job! ~~If you have time, please check out my work and comment, rate if you wish! Thanks!




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