May 27, 2009
a person has fallen today
she is now a missed heart
people balled in period 1
and 3

the sky cryed for her
the sun just would not shine
the grass grew long
and the tears bolted from the lords
the moning of the wind
traveled from all around

my best friend has lost the fight
cancer has won
now all i have to do is cry

the good
her faith
her happiness
her smile
her voice
her giggle

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Amy L. said...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 11:59 am
look my friend died and all you can say is these leasons and then make it about you! no one wants to see your poem marrage! this poem was my raw emotion not a leason!
Amy L. replied...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 12:03 pm
sry i was sad and kinda snippy
qtepa2ti said...
Sept. 7, 2009 at 10:05 am
Hey, thanks for the comment :-)
i liked your poem. i loved how i could imagine the scene and really liked the second stanza in general. nice word choice.
Griffinwing said...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 10:21 pm
Good job! Besides the few spelling errors, I love it. It conveys emotion perfectly.
Amy L. said...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 3:37 pm
thanks so much
cmoney1996 said...
Jun. 13, 2009 at 6:47 pm
This was fantastic I like that you put 2 lessons in it. One is how strong cancer can be and 2 is How much you can miss a person. 3 how hard going throw somebody dieing can feel.Check out my poem called Marriage.
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