abby

May 27, 2009
By AmillamissPriscilla GOLD, Randolph, Maine
AmillamissPriscilla GOLD, Randolph, Maine
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Do what you love in the most adventurous way and make sure it helps people.


a person has fallen today
she is now a missed heart
people balled in period 1
2
and 3

the sky cryed for her
the sun just would not shine
the grass grew long
and the tears bolted from the lords
the moning of the wind
traveled from all around

my best friend has lost the fight
cancer has won
now all i have to do is cry

remember
the good
her faith
her happiness
her smile
her voice
her giggle
her


The author's comments:
abby died of cancer she was 12 and she got it 2 and the second time was too much.

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on Sep. 13 2009 at 12:03 pm
AmillamissPriscilla GOLD, Randolph, Maine
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Do what you love in the most adventurous way and make sure it helps people.

sry i was sad and kinda snippy

on Sep. 13 2009 at 11:59 am
AmillamissPriscilla GOLD, Randolph, Maine
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Do what you love in the most adventurous way and make sure it helps people.

look my friend died and all you can say is these leasons and then make it about you! no one wants to see your poem marrage! this poem was my raw emotion not a leason!

on Sep. 7 2009 at 10:05 am
qtepa2ti PLATINUM, Broomfield, Colorado
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Hey, thanks for the comment :-)

i liked your poem. i loved how i could imagine the scene and really liked the second stanza in general. nice word choice.

on Sep. 6 2009 at 10:21 pm
Griffinwing SILVER, Manchester, Michigan
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Good job! Besides the few spelling errors, I love it. It conveys emotion perfectly.

on Sep. 6 2009 at 3:37 pm
AmillamissPriscilla GOLD, Randolph, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
Do what you love in the most adventurous way and make sure it helps people.

thanks so much

on Jun. 13 2009 at 6:47 pm
cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
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Be the best you an be as you can see i try to be by writing poetry.

This was fantastic I like that you put 2 lessons in it. One is how strong cancer can be and 2 is How much you can miss a person. 3 how hard going throw somebody dieing can feel.Check out my poem called Marriage.




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