Give In

May 27, 2009
By qtepa2ti PLATINUM, Broomfield, Colorado
qtepa2ti PLATINUM, Broomfield, Colorado
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Forget what is right,
give in to the wrong,
fade in with the shadows
and sing Secret’s song.
Obey the voices,
the whispers, the cries.
Be Dark’s new hero
If only at night.
If you resist
then your choice is poor.
Feel free to cower
and stay locked behind doors.
This is real freedom.
The shadows are fun.
Causing true havoc
‘til darkness has won.


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on Sep. 6 2009 at 4:07 pm
AmillamissPriscilla GOLD, Randolph, Maine
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Do what you love in the most adventurous way and make sure it helps people.

wow that was amazing i look up to ure poety in hopes that 1 day i will be as good as you

on Jun. 13 2009 at 6:33 pm
cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
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Be the best you an be as you can see i try to be by writing poetry.

YOUR GREAT!!! check out my poem called Marriage

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on Jun. 11 2009 at 8:23 pm
Surrealist14, Greenville, South Carolina
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that was a really, really, cool poem




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