Marriage

May 27, 2009
By cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
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Be the best you an be as you can see i try to be by writing poetry.


Marriage is not a game. If you think that that's a shame.
When you get married you give up the I's for us and the fuss.
Remember this God Hate Divorce.
I just want this to be enforced.
Make sure you start your marriage before you buy your first carriage.
Marriage is basically when you say i want to be be with you everyday,I'll be O-Kay until I Decay . Marriage doesn't mean 9 kids.
So don't over due, because you can't undo.
The ring is not important if you have true love.
Have true love
TRUE LOVE.
You shouldn't love for who they are, NOT because they're a star.
This is Marriage.


The author's comments:
I hope you learn what Marrige mean coming from a 12 year old.

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on Oct. 29 2009 at 12:04 pm
JasonsBaby GOLD, Spencer, West Virginia
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when i get mad i tend to tell people to "go suck a fart"

you did great especially since your twelve, im 14 and cant write that well, you have serious potential!!!!

on Sep. 6 2009 at 3:41 pm
AmillamissPriscilla GOLD, Randolph, Maine
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Do what you love in the most adventurous way and make sure it helps people.

awesome! i really like what you have to say

on Jun. 29 2009 at 11:49 pm
LakeTownGirl GOLD, Lake Stevens, Washington
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"Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened." -Dr. Seuss

It was good. I like some of your other poems better. But you still have tons of time to perfect your writing strategies. try reading some of mine. i know they're not the best but i wrote them for my AP English class. Hope you like them

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on Jun. 15 2009 at 12:48 am
Surrealist14, Greenville, South Carolina
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Its good, but some of the lines dont make sense. Was it written as a rap? It has that sort of beat

on Jun. 14 2009 at 1:47 am
Griffinwing SILVER, Manchester, Michigan
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PS giving your age and name on your profile isnt a safe thing, just saying.

on Jun. 14 2009 at 1:44 am
Griffinwing SILVER, Manchester, Michigan
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This is what marriage should be, I agree with you. Few grammar errors but besides that nice.

on Jun. 13 2009 at 8:01 pm
qtepa2ti PLATINUM, Broomfield, Colorado
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cool

on Jun. 13 2009 at 2:18 am
singerxchick95 SILVER, Winterport, Maine
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I enjoyed this. Thanks for the comment on my poem :)

on Jun. 12 2009 at 8:54 pm
sillyrabbit GOLD, St.louis, Missouri
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THank you for all the compliments on my writing and good work!!

Emma

on Jun. 12 2009 at 8:05 pm
Sacred_Surrender SILVER, Harrison, Tennessee
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I do in fact like your poem! You kind of beat around the bush a little bit... And you might want to use a little less rhyming patterns... But it was a very good poem. :] Good job!

on Jun. 10 2009 at 10:49 pm
Dandelion PLATINUM, Franklin, Massachusetts
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Haha I like how you comment on your own writing. P.S. Stating that you're a twelve-year-old and that you basically think you're a child prodigy can be unattractive.

on Jun. 10 2009 at 9:56 pm
sillyrabbit GOLD, St.louis, Missouri
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Pretty good. Though I don't think god hates divorce.. I mean when I get married I don't ever want to get divorce (as I assume no one does) but sometimes in some situations divorce is right. Of course I'm not saying you should use divorce as a easy way to get out of a relationship but when you try your hardest to get the relationship to work and the other person just doesn't care anymore then perhaps it is best to get a divorce. Divorce I think should not be used as a easy way out but as a last resort...Meaning you have done everything in your power to get the relationship to work but it isn't working.. That is what I mean.. Anyway sorry to go off like that but had to get that out of my system. Now finally I got one last thing to ask... Why did you comment on your own poem???

Beside good work!!

And keep writing!!

Best of luck,

Emma

on Jun. 10 2009 at 12:26 am
cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
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Be the best you an be as you can see i try to be by writing poetry.

GREAT

on Jun. 7 2009 at 10:39 pm
cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
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Be the best you an be as you can see i try to be by writing poetry.

THIS is won of the best poem I've read from somebody your age




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