May 27, 2009
By Sacred_Surrender SILVER, Harrison, Tennessee
Sacred_Surrender SILVER, Harrison, Tennessee
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As the moon is filled,
with emotions and colors...
I beckon the moonlight to hide my failing
Mask of consciousness.

Reality clashes with the bittersweet land
of mystic realms and dreams...
Persistent awakenings unfocus my chaotic
line of reasoning.

My stiff, yet racing heart
pounds at your door...
Yet, your heart is locked.

My voice betrays me into the
storm of fallen tongues and broken slates...
Our un-human form,
visualizes our need for independence...
For we are all aching to be one another.

Our decaying individuality is washed away
as we bury one another,
in our own faults and happenings.
To each structure of sentence we conduct,
we slaughter those we hold must near.

If I am not myself...
then who am I to mimic?
If I am only myself behind closed doors,
Never shall I be complete...
Nor shall I be human...
For I am the nonexistence of a shadow,
A shadow who could not find the sun.

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This article has 6 comments.

MissKathy said...
on Nov. 6 2009 at 5:54 pm
Love this one too! Safety in conformity but needing individuality dual for control.

on Jun. 20 2009 at 2:52 am
I like this one too! woohoo! Well, I am not too sure what else to say so... yep. I enjoyed reading your poems!

Surrealist14 said...
on Jun. 15 2009 at 1:03 am
Surrealist14, Greenville, South Carolina
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that was a wonderful poem. your grasp on the sensations from the immediate lines was perfectly displayed. Fantastic

on Jun. 10 2009 at 1:54 am
This One Be my fav of the 2 cuz its so true! I Likes all Ur poems tho haha YAY!! And i soooo Happy U Gaves Me some! <3!

on Jun. 10 2009 at 12:29 am
cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Be the best you an be as you can see i try to be by writing poetry.

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YourLove said...
on Jun. 3 2009 at 3:12 pm
This made me float Love! :D

I loved it! ^^

Great Job!

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