What is Love?

May 27, 2009
By Noshabora GOLD, St. Cloud, Florida
Noshabora GOLD, St. Cloud, Florida
17 articles 78 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Poetry and art are when you take decades of thought and condense it into a nifty little portable carrying case that people can see and go 'Oooh, Ahh'... and then forget about it. But what does it matter, so long as YOU remember it?" ~ Bela


Love isn't great,
love is worse.
Love is everything that hurts.

When you lie awake,
it cuts you deep.
Still it slices as you sleep.

With heartache pain,
you cry at night.
Cry of sorrow, and of fright.

You've lost your way,
you've lost your soul.
You've lost the thing that makes you whole.

And years later,
still you'll cry.
Still you'll feel as if you'll die.

But be thankful
for what you had,
even though it hurt so bad.

Through all the pain
that you feel,
at least you know that it was real.


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on May. 13 2010 at 6:17 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

Wow this is so amazing and i L-O-V-E the ending-what a great conclusion!!!

on Mar. 19 2010 at 7:47 pm
wingofangel SILVER, Rusillville, Alabama
5 articles 2 photos 160 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's all about the love. L.O.V.E. - Michael Jackson.

WOW!!!!!!!!!!! this is a little deep but still really good keep up the poem's :) God bless!!!!!!!!

on Jan. 5 2010 at 11:06 pm
whiteraven1989 BRONZE, Batavia, New York
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wow i never thought that niether myself nor anyone ells could sum up the best and worst years of my life and yet you have and yet even more unbelievable to me you did it with both at the same time in the same poem. you did a great job and im looking forward to seeing your next piece.

Paulina BRONZE said...
on Jun. 4 2009 at 1:51 am
Paulina BRONZE, El Paso, Texas
1 article 0 photos 3 comments
WOW!!! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! how you detailed the little things in a short way. The rhyming fit everything so perfect! Keep Writing!! Love always Paulina p.s. read my peoms to (:


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